# Writing Strategy Use this file when the user is not just asking for cleaner English, but for better scientific writing logic. This is the layer that should govern all paragraph- and section-level rewriting. ## Core stance Academic polishing is not only about style. It is also about making the reasoning legible. A polished paragraph that still performs the wrong rhetorical job is a failed edit. ## Hourglass structure Most strong research writing follows a `broad -> narrow -> broad` pattern: - `Introduction`: open the territory, narrow to the gap, then state the study - `Discussion/Conclusion`: start from the specific findings, then widen to implications and limits Use this pattern when deciding paragraph order and section scope. If a draft jumps between background, results, and implications without control, rebuild the progression first. ## Writing order is not reading order The author may draft in one order and the reader may consume in another. A useful planning sequence is: 1. results 2. introduction and conclusion 3. title 4. discussion 5. methods 6. abstract The practical rule for this skill is simple: organize around evidence and argumentative function, not around the chronology of the raw draft. ## Claim, evidence, boundary Every important scientific statement should have three parts: 1. `claim`: what is being said 2. `evidence`: what supports it 3. `boundary`: where the claim stops, or what uncertainty remains Typical failures: - claim without evidence - data without an explicit point - implication without a scope condition - correlation rewritten as mechanism When polishing, repair these failures before polishing rhythm. ## Section responsibilities ### Introduction The Introduction should answer four questions: 1. What is already known? 2. What remains unresolved? 3. What exact question does this study ask? 4. How does the study address it? Do not summarize results or conclusions here. ### Results Results state what was observed. They should provide: - object or system - condition - quantitative support - direct result Do not turn Results into a Discussion section by adding long mechanistic interpretation. ### Discussion Discussion explains what the findings mean. It should address: - how the work fits the broader field - what has been added to understanding - which earlier work is being supported, revised, or complicated - which explanations are plausible - which limitations constrain the interpretation Discussion is the natural home for hedging. ### Methods Methods should pass a reproducibility test: could another group repeat the work from this description, or from this description plus a clearly cited prior protocol? Reject vague writing such as: - `under standard conditions` - `using routine methods` - `data were analysed statistically` ### Conclusion Conclusion is not a mini-discussion. A strong closing usually does three things: 1. restates the central contribution 2. identifies the decisive evidence 3. states the implication with a boundary Do not introduce new data here. ### Abstract The abstract is a mini-paper: 1. context or problem 2. gap 3. approach 4. key result 5. implication It should help the reader decide whether the paper is relevant, credible, and potentially important. ## Citation as positioning Citation is not just a formatting issue. It tells the reader how the current work stands relative to earlier work. Useful categories: - `support`: prior work supports the premise - `borrow`: current work adopts a method, framework, or protocol - `contrast`: current work differs in result, setting, or interpretation - `reuse/adaptation`: material, data, code, or images come from elsewhere Always cite the source actually read and verified. Do not cite a paper as direct support if you only know it through another paper's summary. ## Fairness to earlier work Do not manufacture novelty by flattening previous studies into a weak baseline. Prefer language like: - `Although previous studies showed ..., their performance in ... remains unclear.` - `Earlier work established ..., but did not address ...` This preserves intellectual honesty while still making the gap explicit. ## Overclaim control Watch for: - `prove` - `conclusively` - `unprecedented` - `best` - unqualified `first` Replace or qualify them unless the evidence is unusually strong and the scope is tightly defined.